July 21, 2014

Un-Journaling 17

Instructions: Create a much more interesting version of this sentence: The dog barked.  What kind of dog was it?  Where was it?  Why was it barking? How would you describe the barking?  Make the sentence as interesting as possible by choosing your words and details carefully.


Perro, a husky, barking because he didn't get his food yet.  His bark bark was a very husky bark, very deep.  Perro was in his kennel staring at the food box, barking, waiting for someone to give him some.  Finally, the owner, Mr. Dude came down and saw the kennel ripped in half and saw Perro eating out of the food box.  Perro broke out of his kennel!